Muran's Weapon and Item.

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Muran's Weapon and Item.

Post by Heavy on Sun Sep 10, 2017 3:30 pm

Byond key: Stronger.Each.Day
Character name: Muran
Age: 13
Parent: Athena.

Weapon's Name: Titan's Grace.
Weapon description:A pair of gauntlets forged from Celestial Bronze, they appear to be normal!

Weapon's Image:
Weapon Damage: 4.
Weapon Weight: Small.
Weapon Range: Two tiles.
Weapon abilities:Mark of the Titan.(Passive) - When in use, the user gains an immense increase to their strength rivaling that of a Titan! Once put on, a black mark appears on the back of the wielders neck bonding them until the users unfortunate death.

Note:The user's damage is increased immensely as well.
Weapon material:Celestial Bronze.

Why does this weapon match you:Muran has low self esteem, he constantly doubts himself he feels that without help he'll end up dead before long. The weapon and Muran are one in the same, they both need someone in order to bring forth their true potential otherwise they're useless.


Item's Name: Necklace Of Truth!
Item's Image:
Item's Backstory:This necklace is capable of projecting a blue light in front of the user, anyone caught within the radius is placed under a trance that prevents them from moving and telling a lie. When the necklace is not in use it appears to be gold, but upon activation it turns black. However, the user must remain still while using this item otherwise the target will no longer be stuck in the trance.

Tile-range - 3x3.

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Re: Muran's Weapon and Item.

Post by Alcoholicfungi on Sun Sep 10, 2017 3:55 pm

Weapons need a hard cap on strength boost...
Also..
Gods hate titans?? The range would be close as well, I don't see why it has a heavy weapon's range.

Item cannot be used mid combat, but can be used at the start of combat. For resisting, the target uses their control. Roots, not completely incapacitates.

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Revised.

Post by Heavy on Sun Sep 10, 2017 4:21 pm

Weapon Damage: 4.
Weapon Weight: Small.
Weapon Range: One tile.
Weapon abilities:Mark of the Titan.(Passive) - When in use, the user gains an immense increase to their strength rivaling that of a Titan! Once put on, a black mark appears on the back of the wielders neck bonding them until the users unfortunate death.

Note:+16 added to dmg rolls;Two attacks per turn.

Weapon material:Celestial Bronze.

I accept and welcome all changes, I wasn't too sure how strong the weapon could be at all. I welcome a suggestion in order to make this process easy and smooth, also I accept the item changes as well. I was also thinking of a background story for why these gauntlets were forged in the first place due to god's hating titans, wasn't sure if I should add them here or not but just incase i'll be typing up the story in a book if I  need to present that information.

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